Fade In:
EXT. bedroom ---night
The sister MAGGIE just woke from her sleep and her head rises from the pillow and she looks around.
change persepective with camera to have us see exactly what she would see if she was looking.
She looks to the left and right and sees her brother sleeping
fade out - in
ext. the kitchen/stairs
Maggie is walking down the stairs rubbing her tummy like she is hungry and proceeds down the stairs to the refrigorator.
fade out - in
Maggie looks around in the refrigerator and then pulls out a cheesestick.
fade out - in
Nick sneaks down the stairs to see what his sister is doing and then scares her when she closes the refrigerator door. Maggie drops the cheesesticks and gets angry.
fade out in
Maggie and Nick are runnning around the kitchen and then Maggie gets on top of Nick and Maggie tries to stuff a crumb off the ground into his throught. But Nick wiggles and gets free from Maggie.
fade out in
Nick looks around in the refrigerator and searches to see if he can find another chessestick. Finds one and then the sister is pleased. But pushes him while he is walking away.
Fade out in
Nick is walking up the stairs back to his room.
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Tuesday, October 16, 2007
Final draft as of oct 16
1. It's late at night and the sister opens the refrigereator to get cheese sticks out of the refrigereator.
2. Once the door closes on the sister. The brother scares the sister and she drops the cheese sticks. Now the sister is upset with the brother.
3. The sister looks back into the refrigerator and there is no more cheese sticks.
4. The sister runs around with the brother and jumps on top of him and tries to launch a cheese stick down his throat
5. The brother shakes and gets the sister off of him and runs to the refrigerator.
6. The brother frantically searches the refrigerator for another cheese stick.
7. Another cheese stick is found by the brother and then he runs upstairs after the sister telling him to go away.
1. It's late at night and the sister opens the refrigereator to get cheese sticks out of the refrigereator.
2. Once the door closes on the sister. The brother scares the sister and she drops the cheese sticks. Now the sister is upset with the brother.
3. The sister looks back into the refrigerator and there is no more cheese sticks.
4. The sister runs around with the brother and jumps on top of him and tries to launch a cheese stick down his throat
5. The brother shakes and gets the sister off of him and runs to the refrigerator.
6. The brother frantically searches the refrigerator for another cheese stick.
7. Another cheese stick is found by the brother and then he runs upstairs after the sister telling him to go away.
Sunday, October 14, 2007
Seven Sentence Story:
1. the sister is having breakfast in the kitchen.
2. The brother walks from upstairs into the kitchen. He's wearing pajamas and is in a hurry.
3. The sister takes the sugar and uses the last amount on the Cheerios. The brother sits down
and looks at his sister
4. The sister looks at the brother and then stares down to eat her breakfast.
5. The brother stares at her, places both arms stretched on table and pounds the table. Then the Cheerios falls to the ground and then sister gets mad
6. both look at each other and walk away.
7. the lights dim and then there is a circular light that shines on the spot and then a mother in the distance yells for the kids.
1. the sister is having breakfast in the kitchen.
2. The brother walks from upstairs into the kitchen. He's wearing pajamas and is in a hurry.
3. The sister takes the sugar and uses the last amount on the Cheerios. The brother sits down
and looks at his sister
4. The sister looks at the brother and then stares down to eat her breakfast.
5. The brother stares at her, places both arms stretched on table and pounds the table. Then the Cheerios falls to the ground and then sister gets mad
6. both look at each other and walk away.
7. the lights dim and then there is a circular light that shines on the spot and then a mother in the distance yells for the kids.
Wednesday, September 19, 2007
Monday, September 17, 2007
Tuesday, September 11, 2007
Seven Sentence Story:
1. Girl is allergic to peanut butter, but loves peanut butter to death.
2. Brother gets peanut butter out of the cabinet and places it on the table.
3. Brother gets the peanut butter out and makes a sandwach. Then walks away with the peanut
butter sitting at the other end of the table, from where the girl is sitting down at.
4. Girl grips the table to control herself from reaching for the peanut butter.
5. Boy sneaks around the corner to see what his sister is doing.
6. Now the girl has peanut butter on the end of her spoon and licks it.
7. The brother at the last minute yells no to her sister and takes the spoon from her and says
something along the lines of "So easily manipulated".
1. Girl is allergic to peanut butter, but loves peanut butter to death.
2. Brother gets peanut butter out of the cabinet and places it on the table.
3. Brother gets the peanut butter out and makes a sandwach. Then walks away with the peanut
butter sitting at the other end of the table, from where the girl is sitting down at.
4. Girl grips the table to control herself from reaching for the peanut butter.
5. Boy sneaks around the corner to see what his sister is doing.
6. Now the girl has peanut butter on the end of her spoon and licks it.
7. The brother at the last minute yells no to her sister and takes the spoon from her and says
something along the lines of "So easily manipulated".
Wednesday, September 5, 2007
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